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	<title>Writing the Future &#187; Jared</title>
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		<title>Humanity Lost</title>
		<link>http://sites.duke.edu/writingthefuture/2010/04/25/humanity-lost/</link>
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		<pubDate>Sun, 25 Apr 2010 23:21:34 +0000</pubDate>
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		<description><![CDATA[We all know that Dollhouse is a work of fiction, but let&#8217;s assume for a moment that the technology to imprint memories exists today. A bit more difficult, but let&#8217;s also pretend for a moment that the episode &#8220;Epitaph One&#8221; makes any sense. China has found some kind of wave that can be used to [...]]]></description>
				<content:encoded><![CDATA[<p>We all know that <em>Dollhouse</em> is a work of fiction, but let&#8217;s assume for a moment that the technology to imprint memories exists today. A bit more difficult, but let&#8217;s also pretend for a moment that the episode &#8220;Epitaph One&#8221; makes any sense. China has found some kind of wave that can be used to imprint people both over the telephone lines and in a blanketed area. All of the necessary neurons in a person&#8217;s mind can be rearranged in an instant upon simply hearing this wave. If any of this could someday be technologically possible, what would it mean for humanity?</p>
<p>As long as man has existed, we have worried about our physical health. We can be injured, become sick, and exhaust ourselves. We die when our physical bodies fail to support themselves any longer. Just recently, though, we have begun to find that there are also threats to our mental health. There are constantly new studies that claim that television and video games have adverse effects on our minds, especially as impressionable children.</p>
<p><em>Dollhouse</em> expands on these threats by suggesting the possibility that one day, as quickly as our physical bodies can be murdered, we will be able to lose our minds in an instant. The characters in &#8220;Epitaph One&#8221; are incredibly paranoid about any kind of technology, since in this new world any electronic device appears capable of broadcasting an imprint wave. People must fear for their lives not only because of violence, but also because of technology meant to work for us.</p>
<p>Not only can people lose their own minds, but a single person can exist in multiple bodies simultaneously. When we see Mr. Ambrose in Victor&#8217;s body tell Topher and DeWitt that the company has begun selling the actives&#8217; bodies, he claims he is currently in ten other dolls talking to ten other Dollhouse administrators. At the end of the episode, Caroline hopes that she will find herself alive.</p>
<p>In this imagined world, identity as we know it ceases to exist. Much as in <em>Down and Out in the Magic Kingdom</em>, the physical and mental parts of a person can easily be separated, and the spiritual part appears to be nonexistent. A person&#8217;s body can exist without their mind, and a person&#8217;s mind can live on in different bodies, even simultaneously. In the words of one interviewee in &#8220;Man on the Street,&#8221; if it is possible for this technology to be built, it will be used and abused, and humanity as we know it will be over.</p>
<p>Does anybody else see this kind of technology as the end of humanity as we know it, or could we find some new meaning of identity? Can the body and the mind be so easily separated, or is it impossible to so neatly separate the physical, mental, and spiritual? Obviously no one wants to have their mind permanently overwritten by someone else&#8217;s, but would anyone be okay with having their one mind in ten different bodies?</p>
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		<title>Are Lil and Her Parents Still a Family?</title>
		<link>http://sites.duke.edu/writingthefuture/2010/03/30/are-lil-and-her-parents-still-a-family/</link>
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		<pubDate>Tue, 30 Mar 2010 19:43:10 +0000</pubDate>
		<dc:creator>Jared</dc:creator>
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		<category><![CDATA[Down and Out in the Magic Kingdom]]></category>

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		<description><![CDATA[One thing I find interesting about Down and Out in the Magic Kingdom is that the reader is almost never exposed to any kind of family relationships. As far as I can remember, Julius only briefly mentions his own parents to say they took him to Disney World for his first time, and there is [...]]]></description>
				<content:encoded><![CDATA[<p>One thing I find interesting about <em>Down and Out in the Magic Kingdom</em> is that the reader is almost never exposed to any kind of family relationships. As far as I can remember, Julius only briefly mentions his own parents to say they took him to Disney World for his first time, and there is no talk of any character having even a brother or sister&#8211;perhaps in the Bitchun Society there is simply not the same emphasis on family as in our world today. In fact, the only family the reader does see is Lil and her parents. This relation seems hopelessly riddled with complications and contradictions, but perhaps this is a sign Doctorow believes that, even amid sweeping transitions in society, family will never change.</p>
<p>On the one hand, the Bitchun society seems to constantly come between Tom and Rita and their daughter. Tom and Rita had been members of the original ad-hoc that first seized control of Disney World, much of their time was directed toward keeping the park running instead of spending time with Lil, who likely raised and taught herself for the most part. Additionally, Tom and Rita appear to have a hard time distinguishing their daughter from every other teenage girl in the Bitchun Society. Rita tells Julius she thinks that &#8220;[t]here&#8217;s not much fire in that generation&#8230;Not a lot of passion. It&#8217;s our fault&#8211;we thought that Disney World would be the best place to raise a child in the Bitchun Society&#8221; (77). Finally, when they grow bored, Tom and Rita consider deadheading, but when they talk to Julius about doing so it becomes obvious that they have not even considered the effect it could have on Lil. Rita is quick to tell Julius that &#8220;[i]t&#8217;s just a thought, realy. We don&#8217;t want to worry her. She&#8217;s not good with hard decisions&#8211;it&#8217;s her generation&#8221; (80). When they finally are ready to deadhead, they take their last backups before saying goodbye to Lil. As Julius thinks to himself, &#8220;When they woke, this event&#8211;everything following the backup&#8211;would never have happened for them. God, they were bastards&#8221; (181).</p>
<p>At the same time, though, Tom and Rita are just like any parents today. They honestly believe that Disney World would be a good place to raise Lil, so they do so. Even by the time that nineteen years old they are still at some level trying to help raise her; when Lil gags at Tom and Rita&#8217;s stories, Tom tells her, &#8220;Lil, you&#8217;re an adult&#8211;if you can&#8217;t stomach hearing about your parents&#8217; courtship, you can either sit somewhere else or grin and bear it&#8221; (77). When the two are saying goodbye before deadheading, &#8220;Lil and her mom kissed one last time. Her mother was more affectionate than I&#8217;d ever seen her, even to the point of tearing up a little. Here is this moment of vanishing consciousness, she could be whomever she wanted, knowing that it wouldn&#8217;t matter the next time she awoke&#8230;She was infinitely serene and compassionate, and I knew it didn&#8217;t count&#8221; (182). Knowing that she would never remember the moment, Rita allows herself to be completely, honestly affectionate with her daughter. The scene is mirrored when Rita and Tom wake up from deadheading: &#8220;Even at a distance of ten yards, I heard Lil&#8217;s choked sob, saw her collapse in on herself. Her mother took her in her arms, rocked her&#8221; (187). Rita and Tom do love their daughter, but, as I imagine many parents struggle with, they have not been sure exactly how to show it. Julius comes to this same conclusion when he asks himself, &#8220;Why did she hate me so much? I&#8217;d been there for her daughter while she was away&#8211;ah&#8221; (190). Tom and Rita have simply tried to raise a child in the unprecedented Bitchun society; they are nowhere close to perfect, as they have made plenty of bad decisions&#8211;deadheading in particular&#8211;but they still love their daughter.</p>
<p>But that is just my take. What are your ideas on the relation between Lil and her parents? What grade would you give Tom and Rita on raising their daughter? Do you think that the family as we know it will persist in the future, or does the Bitchun Society, a world where parents and children alike can live forever, destroy any notion of family?</p>
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		<title>Technology&#8217;s Role in Society</title>
		<link>http://sites.duke.edu/writingthefuture/2010/02/14/technologys-role-in-society/</link>
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		<pubDate>Sun, 14 Feb 2010 22:11:08 +0000</pubDate>
		<dc:creator>Jared</dc:creator>
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		<description><![CDATA[In her novel The Dispossessed, Ursula K. Le Guin uses the setting of a distant planet and its moon to explore the relationship between technology and society, drawing both extensions and contrasts to her world. Le Guin uses A-Io on Urras to draw a vision of an America set in the future; this relationship becomes [...]]]></description>
				<content:encoded><![CDATA[<p>In her novel <em>The Dispossessed</em>, Ursula K. Le Guin uses the setting of a distant planet and its moon to explore the relationship between technology and society, drawing both extensions and contrasts to her world.</p>
<p>Le Guin uses A-Io on Urras to draw a vision of an America set in the future; this relationship becomes clear when considering the role of technology in life. Shortly after Shevek arrives on Urras he notes that there are few cars on the roads, saying that &#8220;all such luxuries which if were freely allowed to the public would tend to drain irreplaceable natural resources or to foul the environment with waste products were strictly controlled by regulation or taxation (82).&#8221; In the 1970s, the environmentalist movement was just starting to grow, and the image of fuel-inefficient cars being extravagant polluting machines was beginning to become more popular. Many in America were, and still are, worried that the perpetual increase in the number of cars on the road is unsustainable and will become too much of a drain on unrenewable resources in addition to creating pollution.</p>
<p>Additionally, though A-Io realized that the number of cars it had was unsustainable and cut back, the nation in the novel was not able to completely recover from its exploitation of the environment. Though Shevek notes that &#8220;the excesses of the Ninth Millenium were ancient history&#8221; (82), he also says that there was a lasting effect of a shortage of certain minerals which Urras is now forced to import from its moon, Anarres.</p>
<p>On the other hand, Le Guin does not simply use the alien setting to extend the role of technology on Earth; she uses Anarres to present entirely new ways of using technology in society. In Le Guin&#8217;s time, computers were starting to become more popular, and in her envisioned future computers play much larger roles in everyday life. All of the citizens of Anarres, when born, receive their names not from their parents, but from a computer. When Vea exclaims it would be &#8220;dreary&#8221; and &#8220;impersonal&#8221; to be named by a machine, Le Guin has Shevek disagree, saying &#8220;what is more personal than a name no other living person bears?&#8221; (198). Where no single person or committee would be able to keep track of such a large number of unique names, a computer can handle the task with ease, allowing the people on Anarres to only need to use their single name as identification. (It is interesting, though, that Takver dislikes the name for her child, Sadik, saying &#8220;it sounds like a mouthful of gravel&#8221; (250), as though she wishes she had been able to choose a name for her own child.)</p>
<p>Computers and extensive communication lines on Anarres are also used by Divlab to, as the name would suggest, divide the labor. Citizens on Anarres are allowed to put in requests to the system, asking for jobs according to what they believe are their individual strengths. Additionally, places all over the planet will post job openings through the system as well. Divlab will then make recommendations to each person on which job posting to take, but there appears to be a great deal of flexibility in the process.</p>
<p>Does Le Guin fairly use the state of A-Io to mirror a possible future for America in the face of environmental exploitation? Can you see people ever agreeing to allow a computer to produce names, or, like Takver, will we always feel the proprietarian want to name our own children? Are there any other examples of technology&#8217;s role in everyday life in <em>The Dispossessed</em> that stood out for you?</p>
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		<title>Missed Choice in Star Trek</title>
		<link>http://sites.duke.edu/writingthefuture/2010/01/31/missed-choice-in-star-trek/</link>
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		<pubDate>Sun, 31 Jan 2010 20:42:04 +0000</pubDate>
		<dc:creator>Jared</dc:creator>
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		<description><![CDATA[The 1967 Star Trek episode “The City on the Edge of Forever” uses an alternate timeline to consider the consequences of war protest, but it misses out on the opportunity to explore issues of destiny and choice. In the episode, Kirk and Spock chase McCoy back through time to 1930 to prevent him from altering [...]]]></description>
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<p style="margin-bottom: 0in"><span style="font-style: normal">The 1967 </span><em>Star Trek</em><span style="font-style: normal"> episode “The City on the Edge of Forever” uses an alternate timeline to consider the consequences of war protest, but it misses out on the opportunity to explore issues of destiny and choice.</span></p>
<p style="margin-bottom: 0in"><span style="font-style: normal">In the episode, Kirk and Spock chase McCoy back through time to 1930 to prevent him from altering the timeline and starting a chain of events that would prevent all of the characters from ever being born. Should they fail to stop McCoy from saving Edith, she will form an anti-war movement that will prevent the United States from entering World War II, allowing Nazi Germany to win the war and change the world as we know it. Thus, in order to return the timeline to normal, Spock tells Kirk that they must allow Edith to die.</span></p>
<p style="margin-bottom: 0in"><span style="font-style: normal">The episode presents a very black and white view: either Edith and her anti-war views quite literally die, or the world will be irrevocably changed for the worse. Given the time that the episode comes from, this message must have been very powerful to the anti-Vietnam War movement. “The City on the Edge of Forever” suggests that even a single, unknown citizen opposing war can lead to the downfall of the entire country. Edith has no recognition outside of her mission, but her mere mention of peace instead of war will gain enough momentum to capture the ear of the President and prevent the country&#8217;s entry into the war, presumably even after the Pearl Harbor bombing occurs. Kirk tries to stand up for Edith, saying, “She was right; peace was the way,” but the entirely logical Spock replies, “She was right&#8230;but at the wrong time.” </span><em>Star Trek</em><span style="font-style: normal">&#8216;s writers suggest that peace at the time, in the face of the Soviet Union, was not possible, and crying for the end of war was equivalent to calling for the destruction of our country.</span></p>
<p style="margin-bottom: 0in"><span style="font-style: normal">However, this episode leaves a lost opportunity to further explore destiny and choice. When Spock tells Kirk that Edith must be allowed to die for history to resume its natural course, Kirk is crestfallen but accepts Spock&#8217;s word as the truth. At no point in the episode do either of the characters even consider the possibility that there is some other course of action they could take. </span><span style="font-style: normal"><span style="font-weight: normal">With all of their intelligence, Spock and Kirk could not come up with a way to allow Edith to live while making sure she does not change the course of World War II. In fact, they not once even try to! This is especially shocking for Kirk, who claims he has fallen in love with Edith. A different ending was possible; once Kirk and Spock had located McCoy, the Guardian of Forever could have taken Edith back to the present as well. Edith herself likely would have embraced this move to the futuristic utopia, as seen when she recounts her dream of a day when man had reached space and could turn attention from making war to building peace.</span></span></p>
<p style="margin-bottom: 0in"><span style="font-style: normal"><span style="font-weight: normal">While the one I propose could be a fitting ending to a novel or a movie, could it ever be the ending a </span></span><em><span style="font-weight: normal">Star Trek </span></em><span style="font-style: normal"><span style="font-weight: normal">episode, or </span></span><span style="font-style: normal">must the episode maintain the status quo, returning history and its major characters to exactly the way they were found? What alternate ending would you have envisioned for this episode, or, if there is none, why do you stand by the original? Finally, does the episode raise a valid point about the possible negative consequences of protesting a war, or does it go too far in claiming that Edith could have singlehandedly destroyed the country with her talk of peace?</span></p>
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		<title>About Jared</title>
		<link>http://sites.duke.edu/writingthefuture/2010/01/20/about-jared/</link>
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		<pubDate>Wed, 20 Jan 2010 14:03:32 +0000</pubDate>
		<dc:creator>Jared</dc:creator>
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		<description><![CDATA[Hey everyone, My name is Jared Nelson. (Well, actually my first name is Davis. Apparently when I was first born I was named Jared Davis Nelson, but for whatever reason my parents decided, just hours afterward, to swap my names but still call me Jared.) I live close to Winston-Salem, and here I&#8217;m a freshman [...]]]></description>
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<p>My name is Jared Nelson. (Well, actually my first name is Davis. Apparently when I was first born I was named Jared Davis Nelson, but for whatever reason my parents decided, just hours afterward, to swap my names but still call me Jared.) I live close to Winston-Salem, and here I&#8217;m a freshman in Giles. Anything computer-related fascinates me, and accordingly I&#8217;m planning to double-major in ECE and CS; I also play in the jazz band and would like to get into robotics this semester. As far as science fiction goes, one time I started reading <em>Dune</em>, and even though I could not get into it at the time I would be willing to try again.</p>
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